What do you think, it’s a crime/action/kung-fu movie. What do you think, this is just the opening scene. Keep in mind of 12 years old. I copy and pasted it so the dialouge should be in the middle but it’s not, in the script it is so don’t complain about that.
INTRO. EL PASO TEXAS DESERT (DAY)
The screen is BLACK. Suddenly a trunk opens revealing three men, grabbing
something from inside. The sun shines brightly, the audience can tell it’s
a very hot day. The three men, are all around thirty, and are all dressed in
black suits with no ties. The one in the middle is OWEN, the leader. He is
bald and has a small, scrummy beard. The one to his right is ALEX, he has
black hair, and is dressed the same as OWEN. The one to OWEN’s right is JAK.
JAK is almost identical to ALEX, except JAK has shorter hair. The three pull
45 MAGNUMs from the back of the trunk. After each as retrieved their gun they
stand back up. Each begins putting MAGAZINES in their guns.
So what did JACKY have to say?
He got me this girl, MIA.
He got us a girl?
Yeah, but JACKY says she’s a cold blooded
Is she hot?
Well, I’m told she’s not that bad looking.
So what’s her name again?
OWEN gets his magazine in his gun. He pulls the
I’m not too sure about hiring a woman.
You can’t trust them.
But it was your idea to hire KATEY.
JAK becomes a little EMBARRESSED and SHY.
Well… we know KATEY, we can trust her. This MIA chick,
we don’t, well atleast I don’t know any fucking thing about
her. KATEY I know.
ALEX gets his magazine in his MAGNUM. He also pulls the
KATEY’s an asshole.
ALEX puts his GUN back in the trunk he bends over in front
of the CAMARA, leaving a bit of it BLACK. He stands back up.
And has JACKY ever gotten us someone we can’t trust,
or count on.
JACKY said she was the best of the best.
There you go JAK, she’s the best of the best.
JAK loads in his MAGAZINE and puts in in the
TRUNK. The gun lands on the CAMARA so a little
corner of the screen is covered in BLACK.
For a little while the TRIO stays silent.
So, when are we doing this?
This is the first time I’ll say “I can’t wait” for
ALEX, we all can’t wait for this job.
When are we going to meet this MIA
Tomorrow, I’m making her go meet this ERNIE
guy, he can give us a little more info on the
Who the hells ERNIE?
ERNIE was a good friend with JOHN, he probably knows
more on the cash then anyone. DANNY knows him pretty
Does he live near the MOTEL?
No, no. No one does. Infact nothing does. It’s
the perfect scene for a BLOODY MASSACRE.
OWEN bends over in the trunk. He kneels over covering the center
of the CAMARA, making it black. He stands pack up revealing a
briefcase. He opens it. The back of the case is facing the CAMARA
so we do not see whats inside. OWEN closes it and puts it back in
OWEN opens the sleeve of his shirt and pulls out
a pack of CIGS. He pulls one out and lights it
with a lighter he grabs from his pucket. He takes
OWEN (to ALEX)
We could fit those shotguns you wanted
I think we should stick with our MAGNUMS. That’s
what we always have.
ALEX (to JAK)
Shut the fuck up you pussy.
JAK, were dealing with DANNY, you’ve
only worked with DAN for maybe two years,
me and ALEX, have worked with him for atleast
seven. He’s like our father, we know everything
about him, and one thing we know about DANIEL
BLONDE, is that he don’t take shit from nobody.
And if you try to put shit in his way, he’s
gonna have to fuck with you. Now DANNY, he’s
the master of fucking people up. Now, you can
stick with your MAGNUM, but if you do, your gonna
have to worry about getting your brains blown
out by DANNY.
Listen OWEN, I don’t wanna get in a fight with
you, if you wanna use SHOTGUNS, we’ll use shotguns.
Good, then thats settled. Are we all ready for
Good, it didn’t take too long. But this one we
had to prett prepared for. We know who were dealing
with, DANNY’s our ex-partner and our old friend. We
know he’s a bad ass, and we know he’s a bad ass we
gotta take care of. This isn’t one by BRIAN or JACKY,
this is one we started. We know how important it is,
this is pay back. This isn’t just for the cash. Now
lets just get out of here, wait for a call from MIA
tomorrow, recruite everyone else, and we’ll go to
the DANNY. ROUNTIN’ BOOTS MOTEL doesn’t have a clue,
what its in for.
OWEN shuts the truck. Leaving the screen BLACK. The