Script idea

I have a script idea for a cop movie, it’s a about a transexual cop that gets busted with 20 Kilos of coke and she goes to jail and some shit happends on the way to the jailhouse and it become a hostage situation, and i just gotta come up with some more shit and then write the thing down…



does it sound any good?



P.S. it’s my first script ( idea ).

Wow dude. That has got to be the most original cop movie idea I’ve ever heard as a pitch. Go and write it dude. I’d love to read it.

Well i am on the 61st page of this script called open road about a man who was just lookin for some fun and looks for a prostitute and they actually fall in love but the pimp is a bit of a bastard and pulls the man over and kicks the fuck outta him and john (the man) walks away with the girl so the pimp send loadsa people after him and finally they get hold of the prostitute and john and keep them hostage and i aint got an idea of what to do next any help?? email me car@englan911.wanadoo.co.uk

A transexual cop with coke… Sounds like a song by the Cramps.



Original and on the mark. Keep working on it man. It might be cooler if the cop were a transvestite. Whoa!. Only kidding. But transexual adds a bit more refinement.

Can anyone help me get the script started in any way? i have written down a couple of scenes but i need an opening scene.

Why don’t you start with the cop stuffing the bag or opening the bag full of coke.

Start with the person putting there badge in a bag, then making a bag of coke. Kind of signifiying the cop and the coke at the same time.

or try a voice over like i was driving down the street, and spun round into the darkest alley there is in this shitty town i got out the car and opened the trunk…

revealing the bag of coke!!



it mite be shit cos it was 20 second thinkin

Wow max, thats petty damn cool. Really original, I likes it, i likes it alot. ;D

Thanks, Plundie!

geez this seems crazy, which is always a good thing ;D

Sounds like a cool idea. Ive " Been Back" less then 10 minutes and that avatar thing is kinda annoying me now

what avatar thing

its not really important, but two guys had the same avatar

Who? ???

hahah I found this i wrote a long fuckin’ time ago



This as far as I got with it :stuck_out_tongue:



Transexual Cop Script Idea









Int.

Kitchen table




Bob Dylan’s ‘‘Everybody must get stoned’’ plays in the background



A woman puts a bag on the table. Her face is not visible.

She puts a police badge into the bag, then she puts a bag cocaine in it.



a montage of opening and closening of doors is shown and it stops suddenly.



Close up of hand lightning cigarette.



The Woman is in her boss’s office, getting yelled at.

WRITE IT UP!! Sounds cool!

I don’t know how to keep on with the story…I hate writing scripts but at the same time I love it…

I do find this transexual cop idea strangely interesting. I also has many plot devices as well. When reading it, it reminded me of Dog Day Afternoon(I think Pacino was gay in that one) because of the slight twist of character.



Oh well, keep writing. Very unique. Unique is good.

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I do find this transexual cop idea strangely interesting. I also has many plot devices as well. When reading it, it reminded me of Dog Day Afternoon(I think Pacino was gay in that one) because of the slight twist of character.
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Thanks for ruining the movie for me Hahaha j/k