[quote]Then for reasons undefined he lashes out at his boss, which in my conjecture… talk to a man of higher authority in that fashion, he would have gotten fired.[/quote]
That should say something about what a talent Barry is, the fact that he didn’t get fired, not only that but STILL kept his promotion.
[quote]Barry goes into his apartment and breaks down,throwing hissy fits like a 9 year old. And after that he cuts to the airport…and is already leaving town…all of this in five pages. He never really settles down with a character,what we now about him and the people involved in his life. This isin’t the work of a film student, film students should now better in how to set-up the dramatic premise and character in 10 pages.[/quote]
The “dramatic premise” isn’t focused on Barry’s ‘old’ life. The exposition is revealed through dramatic scenes in his ‘new’ life, hence the title, “Barry’s New Life.” Nice try, though. Seriously.