Overall I liked the video. The long black pauses were a little annoying. I would try and edit something in there. When i was watching the video i think it was in your second minute you had another long pause with a black screen. When i was listening to the music during that pause the first thing that came to my mind were kids playing Ring Around the Rosie in the woods (black and white, slow motion). I dont know why that came to my mind. Maybe you take that and run with it, add something of your own during those pauses. Its just they seemed a little to long.