Delineation my 48 hour project is complete

hey guys i finally got the time to put the film on youtube. Its all done there are some errors in the movie some audio and we didn’t have enough scenes to really make it more clear cause some things arent really clear but it was a 48 hour contest. The link is below just tell me what you think of it and give me some constructive criticism I’m only in high school and I’m graduating to go to a film school just want some ideas on how i could of made it better I’m planning sometime in the future making a full length feature but heres the movie.







Delineation - YouTube

i liked it, it was well filmed in my opinion espicially the opening running sequence, it didn’t seem to “youtube” in its style or execution which was refreshing to see, would like to see a full version soon