I think it came out great! I love the black and white look of the film. I started laughing when he says “You dont know my shoe size…”. I liked the use of the piano too. It adds a nice suspenseful touch. You could make this like a serial. Do 3 minute segments until its over.
Thanks man, I appreciate it! Considering the fact that the dilaogue was invented right there on the spot, it came out quite good. The killing at the end was a little rushed I felt, but otherwise I can’t complain. I am happy with the use of piano too ( That’s from Eyes Wide Shut by the way, I hope Kubrick is not rolling in his grave ;D)
The 3 minute segments are a cool idea. I’ll see what I can come up with.