Thanks I plan on rewriting It, and kind of making the story slower. Also showing his life slowly fading away. Kind of like the movie “Bad Lietenuant” the way he became a total burn out, thats the direction Im going. Thanks for all the help.
Thanks I plan on rewriting It, and kind of making the story slower. Also showing his life slowly fading away. Kind of like the movie “Bad Lietenuant” the way he became a total burn out, thats the direction Im going. Thanks for all the help.