Script (first act done)

STAIRS



Nicky escorts blond and curvy LISA (14) up the stairs,

slowly, telling a joke. The girl is plastered.



NICKY

One day, a man went on a business

trip to Florida. He sees a hooker

and asks "how much for a hand job?“

The hooker says “100 bucks.” The

man says “a 100 bucks? That’s lotta

goddamn money.” So the hooker pulls

him aside and says “see that Mercedes,

I paid for that by giving hand jobs.“

So he pays her the money and gets

the best hand he ever had.



HALL



NICKY (cont’d)

The next day he sees her and asks

"how much for a blow job?” She says

"200 dollars.” “200 dollars, that’s

a lot of money.” She pulls him aside

and says “you see that yacht by the

pier, I paid for that yacht by givin

blow jobs.” So he gives her the money

and gets the best head of his life

– in here, baby.



BED ROOM



Lisa enters first, Nicky behind her, locking the door,

still in the middle of his joke.



NICKY (cont’d)

And when I say the best head, she

sucked like a vaccuum cleaner, so

hard that she sucked his brains out

his dick.



Walks over to the bed and sits down, still talking.



NICKY

On his last day in Florida, he goes

to the hooker and says the hand job

was good, the blow job was great,

how much for the whole package?” She

says “1000 dollars.” “1000 dollars,

that’s a lot of goddamn money.” So

she pulls him aside and says "you

see that island? I could afford that

if I had a pussy."



Lisa doesn’t laugh. It looks as if she wasn’t even

paying any attention to what he was saying.



Nicky stares at her beautiful figure.



NICKY

Damn girl, you like a model, I swear

it. How old are you?



LISA

Fooouurrr–nineteen.

(giggling)

You?



Nicky freezes up - then lies through his teeth.



NICKY

15.



LISA

You look older.



NICKY

I get that a lot.



Lisa gets on her knees, unzips Nicky’s pants, and puts

her head down into his lap.



As she pleasures him with oral sex, he lights up a cig

and enjoys the first drag.



EXT. BACKYARD



Megan sits on the lap of DUME (25), black, a wannabe

gangsta, tough on the surface, but not the real deal.



Slim sits across from them, sucking on a straw that’s

placed inside his beer can. He’s got a poker face on.



DUME

Slim, right? Listen, motherfucka,

your uncle owes my girl here money

for percs. Now she says that he’s

been dodging her for weeks. Makin

up lil fucking excuses, just fucking

holding out. You tell your uncle he

better pay Megan back or else he’s

in for something, ya heard? I don’t

give a fuck, I know people, if you

ain’t thinking I’m serious – I’d have

'em run up in yo crib and blast away

any one they see. I’m remorseless,

I got no feelings. We’re crazy like

that. Grandmas, aunt’s little baby,

anyone. I’m serious as a heart

attack.



Slim’s expression remains blank, sipping his beer.



DUME (cont’d)

I don’t mean to threat, but that’s

what most likely will happen if shit

don’t get straightend out, naw what

I mean, young buck? You don’t want

ya house being sprayed with bullets

now, do ya, over a measily ten bills,

do ya?



Slim remains unruffled, the threats not fazing him.



DUME (cont’d)

I don’t think so. I don’t think so

at all. Just go back and tell your

uncle the deal, and if he doesn’t do

what’s said, there’s gonna be some

fucking problems.



Dume stops speaking, waiting for a response. He gets

none.



DUME

Am I speakin to a wall? It feels

like I’m speakin to a wall here.



Slim doesn’t retort, sipping the last bit of beer.



DUME

What… did it go in one ear and

out the other? You best be telling

your uncle first thing, pronto.



Still eyeing Dume, Slim notices Megan, a little uneasy,

mouthing the words "please."



SLIM

Will do, sweetie.



Dume & Slim share a look. If looks could kill, Dume

would be recently departed.



INSIDE



Larry & Joe are still watching FRIDAY THE 13TH PART II.



Gerry & Ashley enter. Gerry sees Joe and becomes livid.



GERRY

What the fuck is he doing here?



LARRY

Your guess is as good as mine.



Gerry gaits his way over to Joe, grabs him by the collar,

and hauls him off.



ASHLEY

Gerry!



JOE

What the hell? What did –



INT. BATHROOM



Gerry slams him up against the wall, still gripping his

collar.



JOE

– I do? What the fuck is your

damn problem?



GERRY

What in the fuck are you doing here,

you little squirt? Shouldn’t you be

out in the woods drinking some cheap

ass beer with your friends and not

at some drug addict’s house? Why

the fuck are you here?



JOE

I know Beaumont’s sister - that’s

why. She invited me.



GERRY

Why the fuck are you here?



JOE

Beaumont’s sister invited me here.



Gerry’s grip tautens.



GERRY

What did you do here, Joe, huh???

What the fuck are you on?

(examining Joe’s

eyes)

Did Beaumont offer you anything - did

anybody offer you anything?



JOE

No, goddamn it. I’ve just had a

few beers, that’s all. That’s it.



GERRY

A few beers, that’s it? I’m gonna

ask you one more time and you’ll

answer me like I’m Jesus Christ him-

self, or may you die of cancer of

the eye! Did you do any heavy shit

tonight?



JOE

I said NO!! Now get your fucking

hands off me!



Gerry takes his hands off of Joe, looks at him wearily.



JOE

The fuck you trying to be, Gerry, my

big brother - why you always looking

out for me all the time? Why?



GERRY

I made a promise.



JOE

You are always talking about this

promise. I don’t get it, what the

fuck is this promise? I ask what

it is and fuckin Nicky basically in

so many words tells me to fuck off.



GERRY

It’s hard to explain.



JOE

Tell me, what the fuck is this

promise. I wanna know.



GERRY

(eyeing the floor)

I made a promise with…



JOE

With who?



GERRY

Listen – I just don’t like seeing

you here. There’s a lot of creeps

and nobodies here, all they do is

snort and shoot. I don’t want you

falling into the trap. Get hammered

and decide to bang a line, or pop

some fucking pills. You in the woods,

worst thing you could do is try to

hop the cap. At least you can come

back from a broken leg or two.



They just stare at each other.



JOE

I need a cold beer.



GERRY

Yeah well, I need to get jacked.