I thought it was pretty good. Could maybe use a little slower pacing. And Mark seems to be talking alot for a guy being bitten in the neck, yeah. And Henry seems to forget about the crashed car pretty fast. If the TV hadn’t been muted, you could use the news-lady as a distraction to make him forget about the car.
If it looks like my post points out more negative points than positive ones, doesn’t mean I found more negative than positive. It was very good. The script that is, not my post.
