Yeah, some of the dialogue might be alittle… you know… ;D Total agreement there.
As for Tony, I’m definitely gonna work on the psycho thing. I just don’t know what to with him next.
And yes, Frank’s future is not very bright. He is supposed to be obsessed, and kinda ‘almost go mad’ at the end, because what he is trying to is just impossible. And it sounds like an essay because he is talking ABOUT an essay. I actually wrote that essay myself, and I would have used the names of the poems (which do exist) if only they weren’t Norwegian. I mean, the setting IS America.
Ironically, that you should like Robert. He has a very exciting plot function coming up, but I felt he was kinda there just for that and nothing more.
Thanks for reading my script. I really appreciate that you took the time to read it, and even more so critizing it. I will work on it!
