this shit was fvnny and entertaining, youve got something good coming there. try to make the actors show there faces more and make them dress normal-not to gangster-and if gangster make shure you can see there faces, if the film becomes a hit you would want to be able to identify the actors-and the camera shoots that i enjoyed the most are in the jehova witness movies one, were the guy is making the other guy in the hat some food-i liked the way the camera was so still and proffessional, try and get that more and youll get something. compliments for your technical knowlage, you seem to know the fvnctions well.
