that’s some pretty good shit.
however, being a film student, I’ve been taught to nag, so I will
I can see what you were going for, and you accomplished it well for such a raw student film. granted, you can’t get professional actors and whatnot, some of the stuff was just laughable. the key to that is multiple takes. if the girl about to get shot says “you need to check in” and then laughs, tell her to try it again. from what i’ve noticed with my films, she’ll be alot less nervous the next time around, unless shes a complete dolt like some of the girls ive worked with in films.
other than that, there were just a few continuity errors and stuff, but all in all i’m impressed. keep up the good work dude!!