I know it’s been awhile but I’ve got a question about the pacing for those
of you who read this. Lately I’ve ben getting mixed reviews. Some people
seem to think that there’s too many scenes in the script with conversation,
or too much “downtime” as they call it. But then the other reviews are just
the opposite where they think I didn’t do a good enough job building relationships
between characters.
Now, it’s been almost a month since I’ve read the the thing and I’m about to
give it another re-write but I’m not sure what to fix. I know for sure I want
to work to make Brittany a little more innocent but I don’t want to slow things
down too much. I’m kinda thinking about writing a drunk-draft and just seeing
what happens.
