Thanks for all the comments guys. This is the most productive feedback
I’ve gotten on it. I really appreciate it. Most people just say that the drug
content and violence are too over the top.
I updated the link above with the latest re-write. Got rid of most
of the camera directions and tweaked some of the dialogue. Still trying to
flesh out Miranda’s character a bit more while keeping her somewhat
mysterious.
What Tarantino homages are you guy’s talking about? The ony one’s I
did intentionally are the “Stuck in the Middle with You” joke and the
scene where Miranda get’s the shit beat out of her was supposed to
be reminiscent of True Romance. I’m sure there’s more but I haven’t
read it in about a week so the details are kinda fuzzy.
