[quote=“rockofan87”]
call me stupid, but i have a script idea
A guy named Marty who is an up and coming gang member, owes some mob boss money, but he dosen’t have it. Marty and his friend (no name yet, lets just call him jimmy) invested their money in a drug deal that went bad. Jimmy ended put dead and the drug dealer took all thier cash. Now marty owes the mob boss money, so he goes looking for the drug dealer. It takes him all over town talking to dangerous low lifes, but he can’t find the drug dealer. He ends up in a bar with friends of the drug dealers. They decide Marty is asking too many questions so they decide to take care of him. The two friends beat him a little then they tie up Marty throw him in the car and take him some where to kill him. On the way to kill Marty they get in a car accident. The two friends of the drug dealers are dead from the wreck. Marty crawls out of the car goes home deciding to take his chances with the mob boss. He walks into his apartment, and Bang. The drug dealer had been waiting all day in Marty’s apartment to kill him.
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I dont see how they could invest their money into a drug deal… how is it investing… and the whole idea seems a bit cliched, and i dont like how you kill Marty at the end, whats the point?