Congratulations! That was very well done! I liked the style and it kept me interested. I do think it needs a stronger ending. Some sort of twist at the very end would go a long way. But, generally, good job!
Congratulations! That was very well done! I liked the style and it kept me interested. I do think it needs a stronger ending. Some sort of twist at the very end would go a long way. But, generally, good job!