ok. this is super long. and it’s not in script format so it’s gonna turn some people away from reading it. learn to write in script format if you want to make a movie. there’s a free program everyone seems to like called
“Celtx” here’s the url http://www.celtx.com/.
Here are some articles on script writing and a great webpage to teach you some info.
http://www.screenwriting.info
http://www.screenwritersutopia.com/
The Screenwriter’s Handbook by Syd Field
now from what i’ve read, there is some promise. you’ve got action, some interesting characters and you can write.
Just get it into format and more will read it. This should have been posted under screenwriting.
