hahahaha some parts of that were really funny but you should have wrote this particular scene it like this.
Angelo: Mind if i eat it here?
Rance: Yeah but be careful not to drip any on the rug. Dodie just cleaned em.
Angelo: Graciaaaaaas.
Cuts to Angelo eating the ice cream (like jessica simpson in her puplic affaiar music video) in slow motion. In between the slow motion licking and sucking it cuts to Angelo driving while singing to Arethra franklins you make me feel like a natural woman, with a shit load of the ice crem smeared all around his mouth. At the end of the montage type sequence of the eating/driving while singing, the scoop of ice cream falls off the cone and lands right on Angelos dick. So for the whole date with mia he has a big brown spot right were his dick is.
