The big problem people have when it comes to dialogue is, they include a bunch a gabber that doesn’t move the story forward.  There has to be a purpose to everything.
Don’t say that it’s “your” style, because it isn’t.  It’s Quentin Tarantino’s style, and he’s probably a lot better at it than you are (no offense).  My advice is, scrapt the whole Tarantino-esque dialogue, write some more and develop into your own.  Be yourself.  Anyone can write a bunch of dialogue, that “people would talk about in real-life.”  TO ME, that’s not good dialogue, I find it cheap, dumb and quite frankly, boring.
Quentin’s dialogue doesn’t consist of gabber, only the illusion of it.  That’s why he’s so good.  It all moves the story forward, it’s witty, it’s funny, and it’s HIS. ÂÂ
The industry doesn’t need another Tarantino wannabe, they need an “IHOP311.”  Plain and simple.
Do you know how many producers, and literary agents get shown scripts with Tarantino-like dialogue?  He’s the most imitated man in Hollywood.  None of the scripts are ever going to sell when a) They can just get the real stuff from the real man himself, while he’s still alive and kicking, and b) They’re not original.
Sorry if I came across harsh.
